On the Mountain [C]

If I give this show a C, it's probably a pretty bad show, because I really like Christopher Shinn's work; but this one just doesn't cut it.... yet. It feels unfinished to me. He has a germ of an idea, and he expands it to make it interesting, but it just doesn't seem to go anywhere. It's not really a slice of life, and yet it doesn't really have a point. He seems to have just thrown some good ideas into a play with no cohesion.